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Are students addicted to their cellphones? If so is that a problem?
Yes, students are addicted to their cellphones. This is a problem because it interferes with their learning. Students are hung up onto using their phones with social media luring them in, having less time studying school work. Although students are always on their phone, sometimes it also helps with their learning. If the students don't know the question or the problem, they can just search it up on their phones to get an answer. Given these facts, we can agree that cellphones have both negative and positive effects on students and the leading cause of this is social media.
Hi Xij! I really like how you showed both sides of the negative and positive impact of cellphones. Next time can you be more clear on how social media lure the students in.
ReplyDeleteHello Reign, thank you for your feedback. I would apply your constructive criticism next time I do another one of this work.
DeleteHi Xij!! You have a really good argument and I really like the words you used. You can make your second to last sentence better and elborate on it more.
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